About Jon

After graduating from USC's School of Cinematic Arts, Jon Hersh went on to become a full-time story analyst at Creative Artists Agency. During his tenure there, he evaluated thousands of screenplays, pilots, and books, and gave detailed story notes to high-level clients of the agency. After four years at CAA, Jon moved on to the fledgling mini-studio Broad Green Pictures where he helped found a new and innovative Story Department for the 100-employee company. Besides running a busy department that evaluated 50+ scripts per week, Jon had a hand in developing a slate of quality projects for the company and delivering detailed notes to writers and executives. He currently works as a literary manager at Housfire Management in Hollywood.


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Sign up for a Verbal Pitch (8 minutes by Skype or phone) or Written Pitch (2 pages max) and receive a personalized feedback report via email within 5 business days of the session!

Session Date & Time: Sunday 11/11 @ 10:00am - 1:00pm PT

This is for writers with the below formats & genres:

Features: Budgets to $30MM

  • Drama
  • Comedy
  • RomCom
  • Sci-Fi
  • Action
  • Adventure
  • Fantasy
  • Thriller
  • Horror

TV Projects:

  • Network, Cable & Streaming
  • Half-Hour Pilots
  • One-Hour Pilots
  • Drama
  • Comedy
  • Sci-Fi
  • Action
  • Adventure
  • Fantasy
  • Thriller
  • Horror

Other themes & formats that interest this exec:

  • Holiday
  • Animation
  • Coming-of-Age
  • Revenge
  • Futuristic
  • Post-Apocalyptic
  • Sports
  • Road Trip
  • "Buddy"
  • Inspirational
  • True Stories
  • Biopics
  • Young Adult (YA)
  • Female-Driven
  • Period Piece
  • Crime/True Crime
  • Psychological
  • High-Concept
  • Graphic Novels
  • Reality/Unscripted TV

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How To Submit

After you sign up, you will receive instructions on how to submit your contact info or written pitch.

Your material/contact submission is due as soon as you are ready, but no later than 2 hours prior to the start of the session.

You will receive this exec's feedback on your pitch in 5 business days following the session unless otherwise notified.