If you want to get your comedy script in tip-top shape with the help of solidifying your structure, situations, characters, stakes, and even joke punch ups, this is a great place to start.
"Briana’s feedback was exceptional. In the case of my story, I sent her a comedy, which she read twice. Early in the process of digesting (and writing from) her comments, I emailed her: “I just started reading, and I already love and appreciate the notes…”
By the time I finished the feedback she’d posted in my script pdf, and the several pages of thoughts she gave separately after the second read, I realized that, to address her concerns, she had forced me into uncharted areas; I felt emotionally stimulated as an artist.
Briana’s combination of specific comments, questions, and overall suggestions for the script, gave me an extremely valuable consultation/feedback. I couldn't ask for more.
I’d highly recommend Briana to any writer who’d like a fun, smart look at their script."
–Paul Myerberg
About Your Host
Briana Hansen is a comedic writer and actress currently based in LA. A big fan of shaking up traditional narratives, she recently wrote, produced, and starred in an interactive Choose-Your-Own-Adventure-style sketch comedy show "The Choose Your Own Sketch Show" for AmazeVR. She studied writing, improvisation, and sketch performance at The Second City Chicago, iO, The Groundlings, UCB, and a bunch of other places you've probably never heard of. She performs regularly at The Westside Comedy Theater with Mission IMPROVable, tours the country with multiple educational and entertainment-oriented shows for colleges, contributes to a number of online publications as a freelance writer, and works regularly as an actress and Voice-Over artist. She also has a stand-up comedy special on Amazon called "Articulate Neanderthal." She is repped by Anthem Entertainment and The Library Agency.
One-Hour Consultation
Submit your full script and receive an in-depth, one-hour private story notes call with an executive of your choice. You’ll receive specific suggestions on how to elevate your script's dialogue, structure, pacing, characterization, tone, and marketability.
**Please note screenplays are limited to 120 pages maximum. Please contact terra@roadmapwriters.com for pricing on a consultation for a screenplay exceeding 120 pages.